i give yu an 8
but only because this is yur first rap beat, some constructive criticism...
it sounds like tha beat drops at tha wrong time, drop it at tha end of 4 beats or 8 beats, and make sure it sounds smooth when it restarts tha drums and snares. Tha instrument stopped too suddenly, put in a crash or suttin to hide that, or juss fade the instrument while adding another one. The drums werent high enough for a hip-hop song.
ummm...the drums n snares sound like DnB, i c you use fl studios so for example get yur snare and hats and kicks rede, change the amount of red and black boxes to eight, (its on tha top left of where you load the different instrumentsand set tempo to 100 for this one), then do this... for example...
1 is a kick
2 is a snare
3 is an empty space
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1 3 3 3 2 3 3 3 3 3 1 3 2 1 3 3
1 3 3 3 2 3 3 3 3 3 1 3 2 3 1 3
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thas 18, iight i hope that works as a good example, i check out every hip-hop beat so ill look out for yur next one.
ya fellow hip-hop beat maker
Mike