illumatiks's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dark rap loop]

i give yu an 8

but only because this is yur first rap beat, some constructive criticism...

it sounds like tha beat drops at tha wrong time, drop it at tha end of 4 beats or 8 beats, and make sure it sounds smooth when it restarts tha drums and snares. Tha instrument stopped too suddenly, put in a crash or suttin to hide that, or juss fade the instrument while adding another one. The drums werent high enough for a hip-hop song.
ummm...the drums n snares sound like DnB, i c you use fl studios so for example get yur snare and hats and kicks rede, change the amount of red and black boxes to eight, (its on tha top left of where you load the different instrumentsand set tempo to 100 for this one), then do this... for example...
1 is a kick
2 is a snare
3 is an empty space
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1 3 3 3 2 3 3 3 3 3 1 3 2 1 3 3

1 3 3 3 2 3 3 3 3 3 1 3 2 3 1 3

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thas 18, iight i hope that works as a good example, i check out every hip-hop beat so ill look out for yur next one.

ya fellow hip-hop beat maker
Mike

chead86 responds:

thanks for the review, i appreciate it. its good advice, but one thing that seems messed up is that the drums did start at the right time, i checked it. I thought it sounded weird too when i heard it. Anyways, thx i'll do another one soon.

[The Pointlessness of Rap]

even tho i hate to admit it

its a hot beat lol, n my main genre i do is rap beats...so sad :( but seriously tho if yu were serious bout this beat it would sound even more betta...i think admittin that this is good makes me lose some dignity..:( hot ass beat tho!

Wanion responds:

Haha, its cool man. Its fine you do rap, and congratulations I hope you're successful with it. I just enjoy rock and metal. Everyone has their opinions! But I'm glad you liked it!

[::EviL::]

yo nice piece

i think that if yu added sum more sound effects n made it into a rap beat i think itd be even better, lemme kno if yu gonna try it

nice job, perfect for flash

DJStain responds:

Hey bro, the reason why its a loop is because I haven't made it a song yet ;). I will try a couple beats and keep the rap beat in mind. Thanks for the review bro.

[Klassik Krome]

shieet

yu got skillz twizted, this is some hot shit
nice job
i like tha echo out in the beginning

Karbon responds:

glad to hear that delucks. thanx!

[Relax...]

its good

nice job on this one, i think that the instruments kinda sound like they belong in a video game but that instrument yu begin with is mad hot, reminded me of eminem
the drums beat at some parts need a lil changin but otha then those 2 things great job n originality

check out mine, n give me some constructive criticism too please

StealthNice responds:

thanks... although ur not the first one that told me about the drumline... i actually think i know what ur talking about..

[Pess a key]

it was aiight

it was good try puttin in a slight guitar for background lead.

n by the way, when yu exprt your audio files from w/e program yu use, export them as MP3 instead of WAV. so that the kb are smaller when yu submit, its easier, cuz this loop shouldnt be this many kb

but good job, yu got 46 d/l but no reviews when yu asked for them, i hate when people dont leave one. check by my beats sometime

Swapp responds:

sure no problem, thx for the review man:D

hope you also heard my mario beat

gonna check your beats right now xD

[TheComet-SV Mega Mix]

i like...

i like the way the beginnin leads up to the main beat n then the drum roll later on. but since yu put it under dance, yu can barely hear the kick (maybe cuz im wearin earphones:()

but nice beat

Im reviewin cuz i kno wut its like to ask people to review and then they never do!!, so make sure if ya take a look at my beats on here ta review so i can get betta too.

TheComet responds:

Btw, the kicker can't be heard because of ur headphones, I can hear them very distinguishly in there.
I'm going to check your audio out once I finish this review :)