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its better lol

its better than crackcoccaine and funkballs..but still not good

Hinarf responds:

hahaha your angering me, therefore i shall make a whole new song and bring it here tommorow or the day after, depending on when i get back from alien vs predator.

eh

this one aint good either, when yu made these yu prolly werent in 'tha phase' or that mood.

Constructive Criticism-tha snares need to be LOUDER!!!; tha breaks in this song, where there is no sound between loop, doesnt sound good. On some songs it sounds ok but not this one.

Hinarf responds:

Yeah i know, but i uploaded it anyways. I have corrected my errors on that within the blessed time i have been allowed to use this program. I also discovered neat ways to use it excessively and still sound good. i think beat breaks can make a song really dynamic, NOW IM GONNA MAKE COUNTRY MUSIC!

damn yo

no offense, but im suprised how yu could go from great songs like determination and innocent to this, its rele not that good, but its all good, ill keep checkin up on ya songs neways cuz i can see yu got style.

Hinarf responds:

These are like the first songs that i had ever put out. These are nowhere near new. Hey at least i got a fan, which i didnt expect. I wont let you down, matter of fact ill even mention when they are new.

hey! nice one!

oh shit! im feelin this one! thas nice, simple and great! could use some changeups though, but its not always needed, people here are used to hearing trance and techno so they expect a change in melody in rap songs.

check out my beats too, if yu like them then yu might get some ideas off of them..this song gave me inspiration tho, ill tell yu that...its OFF TO THA BEAT MAKER!!!

yea its better

i would email yu bout collab but i cant on this computer!! 'Why?' yu ask, because its gay like that...yea i use fruityloops too but i got producers edition so its all good

Hinarf responds:

Well that makes collab almost impossible. Unless you got another computer. ISNT IT BETTER THOUGH!? I listened to it, and was like damn i need to delete that other one.

I still to this day havn't used collab.

Uh... 2011. I just download 10. Uhm.. I'm gonna try stuff.

i liek this one too!!

yea it is low quality but its still good, id have to hear it high quality, i like collabin too!

Hinarf responds:

Shit i just took like six sleeping pills, but if you want, we could work on eachothers shit. My emails pchonkeyboy@aol.com Email me and we shall further talk, i do it just to put music out. I use fruityloops. I dont like it though.

oooo

i like, i gave yu a two in effort cuz it only took yu 5 minutes tho, but i was expectin crap and i got this, yu made my evening better with this! good job!, n thanks lol

Hinarf responds:

excellant excellant, just what i want to hear. I got tons of stuff i havnt submitted. They as well took me about 5 minutes, the longest one i ever made was motionless bagel. That took forever cause midi's are satans tool. I like collabing!

eh...

yu got potential, i can tell yu that but theres alot of things that need to be done, in all 3 of yur volume of beats...it needs to not loop so much, drums and snares need to be louder,matta of fact, they need more snare, a more 'gangsta' drum beat lol if yu kno wut i mean, think of some nice melodies to make a beat with, but i c yu juss getiin startted n this sounds ALOT betta then my first one, so good job

Peter90688 responds:

Thanks man. My screen name is Butt Fadda. Instant message me, Im open for advice man.

haha

for a person who dont like rap, yu can pull it off, yu got one fo them rare rap voices, i assume thas you. lyrics need some change n need to be turned down juss a lil bit
great job tho, good producin too lol

i give yu an 8

but only because this is yur first rap beat, some constructive criticism...

it sounds like tha beat drops at tha wrong time, drop it at tha end of 4 beats or 8 beats, and make sure it sounds smooth when it restarts tha drums and snares. Tha instrument stopped too suddenly, put in a crash or suttin to hide that, or juss fade the instrument while adding another one. The drums werent high enough for a hip-hop song.
ummm...the drums n snares sound like DnB, i c you use fl studios so for example get yur snare and hats and kicks rede, change the amount of red and black boxes to eight, (its on tha top left of where you load the different instrumentsand set tempo to 100 for this one), then do this... for example...
1 is a kick
2 is a snare
3 is an empty space
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1 3 3 3 2 3 3 3 3 3 1 3 2 1 3 3

1 3 3 3 2 3 3 3 3 3 1 3 2 3 1 3

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thas 18, iight i hope that works as a good example, i check out every hip-hop beat so ill look out for yur next one.

ya fellow hip-hop beat maker
Mike

chead86 responds:

thanks for the review, i appreciate it. its good advice, but one thing that seems messed up is that the drums did start at the right time, i checked it. I thought it sounded weird too when i heard it. Anyways, thx i'll do another one soon.

if neone wants to collab or gotta request email me at illumatiks@yahoo.com

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